Post by Lightningtrail on Jul 25, 2015 12:56:38 GMT -5
Goldenstar shivered as she slowly rose from her nest. She tried to shake off this strange, uncomfortable feeling from her pelt, but she just couldn't. She sighed, but could not stop from letting out a rasping cough. Ever since she did the ceremonies, she had felt worse and worse each day. It was almost as though some weight was weighing on her, getting heavier each day. She did not want to admit it to herself. To admit it would be showing her weakness, and she could not let StormClan notice that she was not as strong as she was not many days ago. She gave her pelt another shake, took in a deep breath, and stifled her coughing. She made a promise to herself to meet with Nightpoppy later, but for now, she had to remain strong. She had to at least pretend that she was perfectly healthy, perfectly strong. She stepped out of her den.
From far away, it was not obvious that she was not feeling well. Her fur was precisely groomed, she stood as tall and regal as always, and she called the clan with the same amount of confidence that she had always done. "StormClan! Gather like dark clouds in the sky!" but as one approached, it became evident that the leader was not as healthy as she desperately tried to be. Her eyes were dull, and her legs shook with each step that the golden cat took. "I have taken notice that we are in need of a new deputy," She announced after the clan had gathered. "I have decided who shall take the place of our previous deputy. The decision was difficult, as many of you would make fine deputies, but one cat stood out from the rest, and I believe that she will make a strong, loyal deputy."
Goldenstar searched the crowd until she found her. "This she-cat is known for her bravery and her compassion, and I believe that she would be able to assist StormClan greatly with her strengths. Finchsong, will you take the position of StormClan deputy?"
(Wolf)
From far away, it was not obvious that she was not feeling well. Her fur was precisely groomed, she stood as tall and regal as always, and she called the clan with the same amount of confidence that she had always done. "StormClan! Gather like dark clouds in the sky!" but as one approached, it became evident that the leader was not as healthy as she desperately tried to be. Her eyes were dull, and her legs shook with each step that the golden cat took. "I have taken notice that we are in need of a new deputy," She announced after the clan had gathered. "I have decided who shall take the place of our previous deputy. The decision was difficult, as many of you would make fine deputies, but one cat stood out from the rest, and I believe that she will make a strong, loyal deputy."
Goldenstar searched the crowd until she found her. "This she-cat is known for her bravery and her compassion, and I believe that she would be able to assist StormClan greatly with her strengths. Finchsong, will you take the position of StormClan deputy?"
(Wolf)