Showing you the lands (Roselocke)

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OOC: there's one little thing you should know: English isn't my mother tongue, which is why I'll make grammar mistakes, chose weird wordings, etc. Hope you understand
Also, I hope it's okay that I started this off at the apprentice ceremony.

Stormflower felt pride warming her heart. She had finally gotten her first apprentice! Ever since becoming a warrior she had waited for her name to be called at the naming ceremony of a new apprentice. A lot of her friends already had apprentices of their own and she had always envied them when they went off towards the training area in the morning to teach the eager young cats battle moves, climbing, hunting and all the other skills the would need to serve their clan well as warriors.
As thrilled as she was, though, she couldn't help but feel a bit worried. What if she wouldn't get along with Echopaw? What if she turned out to be a horrible mentor and the young she-cat would fail to reach her full potential because of this? And, most importantly, how was she going to teach her proper tracking and hunting with her own skills being so poor in both areas, mainly due to her bad nose?
but looking down at the little bown spotted cat next to her, she found herself determined to give her very best as a mentor and teacher to her. She was glad to have her as an apprentice; even as a kit, Echopaw had already seemed energetic and confident from what Stormflower had seen.
Clearing her throat, not really sure what to do or say, she asked, "So, are you ready for your tour of the territory?"

Roselocke

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Tags: @pandya
Muse: Great
OOC: SO sorry! This thread got buried!
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Echopaw was an apprentice.

Trotting happily to her new mentor, she felt excitement pouring out from her. The spoted she-cat stared up at her new mentor with a jazz of hyper energy, as she was completely prepared for anything and would happily do anything. And soon, when she finished her training, she would be a warrior! Now that made her just as excited. With a glow in the sharp yellow orbs, she listened to her mentor's words, before nodding happily,"Yes! Of course I am!" Her meow was still quite high pitched from her young age, but soon enough it would fade away into her older, less kit like voice.

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OOC: no problem, that happens to everyone

"All right then, let's get going, shall we?", Stormflower said, a sparkle of excitement in her own eyes, as she saw the young cat almost quivering with the same. She started padding towards the camp entrance, stopping to wait for her and went on, "I hope you have eaten enough this morning. This is going to take a while, our territory is quite large as you'll see."
Where should they start? She still remembered her own first tour vividly, all the excitement and nervousness and hapiness she had felt. And the pride as her mentor had explained all the parts of LeafClan territory to her. She hoped she would be able to get Echopaw to feel similarly.
She decided to start off with the Mossy Pool, which had been one of her favorite spots as an apprentice.
"All right, you already know our camp", she told Echopaw as she caught up with her. "LeafClan's territory mainly consists of birch tree forest as you probably know. Do you know how to climb already?"

Roselocke

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Tags: @pandya
Muse: Great
OOC: SO SORRY! It happened again, to a more extreme measure!
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Her paws tapping the ground in excitement, Echopaw could not help but smile, her yellow eyes glimmering in excitement. She was going to become a warrior one day, and she only hoped she could hold the spot at the top of them all, even past her at times snappiness. Her thoughts running wild, she was frantic to think of everything they could do that day, until she heard her mentor's voice touch the air once more,"Oh, yes I did! I had a nice vole, and I shared a mouse with Cloudpaw." Another blink of her sharp yellow eyes before the spotted she-cat smiled once more, her muscles rippling under her short, shiny coat as she took more steps forward, until she finally settled beside her mentor. She listened intently, nodding in agreement to how she knew the camp, but was asked with a question that left her dumb-folded. Did she know how to climb?"No, I do not. I never learned in camp." She let the words touch the air through her muzzle as that piercing yellow gaze settled into her mentor's eyes.