hello who are you (shinykitty)

[Vinepool]

Waspaw open his eyes heavy with sleep and sat up and groomed him self and stood up and started padded torwards the clearing and sat down to relax tell someone woke up. Waspaw hated being alone so he padded in to the apprentice again to wake up his friend when he stepped on a slepping she cat. Waspaw didn't know if  he should run out of the den or stay where he was, but he stay there waiting for the she cat to wake up to say sorry for stepping on her.

muse: ok

occ: by the way you write occ to let the person know you are not talking like your cat would. if you have any question type occ and ask me

tags:@shinykitty

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Sunkit woke up. "Mmph!" She complained. "That's hardly a way to wake someone up!" Sunkit glared at the tom, then remembered her manners and sat up. "I'm Sunkit. What's your name?" Sunkit liked this young tom, even if he did step on her. He seemed nice enough. She stood up fully, realizing for the first time where she was. "Oh gosh. I'm in the apprentice den, aren't I? Um, sorry. I've never really.." Sunkit trailed off, remembering she never gave him time to answer her question.

[Vinepool]

Waspaw said," my nmae is waspaw and I don't mind you being in here... I am like the only one in here". Waspaw likes this she-cat very much. Most cats he steps on get mad at him and shout and hiss at him. Waspaw said," thank you for not getting mad when I stepped on you and when do become a aprentice". Waspaw hoped it was soon so they could go out of camp together and hunt. Waspaw said," sorry I ask so many questions... I am just curious". He hoped sunkit didn't mind him asking so many questions.

ooc: I hope they work out together

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Sunkit was surprised by the sheer number of questions, but wasn't annoyed- she asked too many questions herself! "I'm gonna become an apprentice at the next ceremony. I can't wait! I want to see the water again. I remember it.." Sunkit trailed off, lost in the memory of seeing the water by sunrise, and snow heaped around her paws. "Well, Wasppaw, It was nice meeting you, but the queens are probably worried about me- accidentally spending the night here. See you around!" She flicked her tail at him, and rushed off.

OOC: It would be Wasppaw, not waspaw, even with the pp. Also, you have a bit of a problem with run-on sentences, please try to add commas and end your sentences more.
I agree, they would be a cute couple!

The next day...

[Vinepool]

Waspaw opened his eyes still heavy with sleep and his dream still fresh in his mind he sat up. He had felt someone poke him. He hoped it was sunkit, but he saw the apprentice sleeping next to him legs on his side. He was very upset that it wasn't sunkit. He had enjoyed his meeting with the she vat. He stood up and walk to the exit and sat down outside. He saw a cat sitting outside near the nursery. Wsapaw said," hello, who are you"?

ooc: I know, I know and I will try harder next time.

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Sunkit woke for a start, and looked around. Same old nursery. She padded outside, and to her surprise, Wasppaw came up to her! "Um, Wasppaw, It's me, Sunkit? you met me yesterday?" Sunkit purred in amusement. "I didn't think you were so mouse-brained you forgot me after a day!" Sunkit stood up and shook out her pelt. "Come'on Wasppaw, let's play a game!" Sunkit was excited; The striped tom had caught her fancy.

[Vinepool]

Waspaw was happy someone wanted to play with him for once in his life. When he ask the other apprentices to play with they said no. Waspaw said,"Sure, lets play... mossball, I will go get one". Waspaw padded off in search of a mossball. He found one and brought back over to sunkit. Waspaw said,"Ready, set, go"!! Waspaw launched the mossball in the air and wanted for sunkit to catch it.

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Sunkit launched herself in the air, reaching out- and missed. It flew off of her paw, and bounced towards the nursery. Sunkit scowled, but only for a moment, running up to the moss-ball and grabbing it. "Your turn" She mewed, launching it into the sky, as it performed a high arc and flew down in Wasppaw's general direction.

[Vinepool]

Waspaw quickly jumped up and caught the moss ball with ease. Waspaw had saw sunkit trying to the moss ball he saw her not stick out her claws.Waspaw thought he should tell her that so she could get better at moss ball. Waspaw said," Sunkit, when you try to catch the moss ball make sure to put your claws out, here try again". Wsapaw throw the moss ball in the air and waited for sunkit to catch it.

ooc: I am just wondering have you read the whole warriors series? I have it is really interesting.