Perfecting hunting- tagged-

[Kittyoemily]

Rosestorm
Rosetsorm finally had an apprentice. Her first apprentice, and it has been a little over a moon, but she thought she was doing a terrific job. Of course she was, Rosestorm thought, for she was such a great hunter, and a great warrior in general. It was lucky for Morningpaw that she Rosestorm was chosen as her mentor, keeping in mind however that she was lucky to get such a obedient apprentice as well. For Rosestorm knows that this apprentice, with her starclan given listening abilities will learn more, and faster than most apprentices. Rosestorm almost jumped with joy while waiting in the clearing at the thought of yet another lesson today. It would be another hunting lesson, for Rosestorm has been trying to avoid the climbing lessons, for she did not want to let Morningpaw down, that Morningpaw has the one leafclan warrior that couldn't climb trees well. Rosestorm lifted her head up though as she thought about how lucky the young apprentice was all the same, for Rosestorm was a terrific hunter. Rosestorm started to pace in the clearing waiting for Morningpaw to wake up and leave the apprentices den. Rosestorm started to second guess if she should be teaching more hunting techniques yet again, this made her pace even faster.


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( I think I figured out the mistake lol)

[nomstar]

OOC: Hey, sorry that I haven't replied yet! I forgot...
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The cream coloured she-cat was sitting in her den and watching something closely on the ground. A little worm was squiggling across her nest and her violet eyes were trained on it. Come on little worm! She encouraged it, You can do it! The tiny pink creature was almost at the edge of the den. Morningpaw's nest was near the edge, so that the other apprentices could sleep near the middle and be warm. She didn't mind that much. It wasn't too cold. 

Just then, the scent to f her mentor drifted into the den and reached the lone apprentice. She pricked her ears and looked up eagerly as she heared Rosestrom outside. Training! Rosestrom was the best mentor. She was so kind and never did boring things. The apprentice stood up and whispered, Bye little wormie! Before bounding out of the den and stopping in front of her mentor. Hello Rosestorm, what will we be doing today?

[Kittyoemily]

Rosestorm
Rosestorm continued to pace until she heard the paw steps of Morningpaw. Quickly Rosestorm Composed herself by sitting down proudly with her tail wrapped around her white paws. Seeing the energy that Morningpaw had made Rosestorm even prouder of the young shecat. She reminded Rosestorm a bit like herself when she was an apprentice. "Hello Rosestorm, what will we be doing today? " The young shecat said. " Well Morningpaw, I was thinking that we could perfect your hunting skills some more today." Rosestorm said with a bit of a purr. " but of course you should take a little something to eat before we head out, and you know what you should do before you eat morningpaw, don't you?" Rosestorm looked at her apprentice with pride, and yet some apprehension, hoping the young she cat knew to grab some prey for the elders. For Rosestorm was still a bit nervous if has been training the young she cat correctly.

[ ooc: not a problem, I understand, we all get busy.]