The She-Cats ( Open to All She-Cats )

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Beekit had just got done practicing some battle moves with a warrior. He was tired now, he was laying down in the middle of the clearing, he mother has told him many times not to get under anyone's paws, but he was laying there first and the warriors and apprentices could move. He knew that was kind of mean, but he didn't feel like moving at all, he felt dirty, and he hated to be dirty, but he was to tired to move.
"I've never been this tired before, is this how warriors and apprentices feel!? Maybe I'm just out of shape. I hope I'm not, that would be unattractive."
Beekit stood up and began to clean himself. He licked his paw and ran it over his head. He would need to look his best to attract the she-cats.

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Sandpaw stalked into the clearing, her eyes droppy and her shoulders hunched. "I'm soo tired!" she complained, padding over to Beekit and laying down, "How's you day been going?" Sandpaw perked her eyes as she yawned. 

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Beekit was almost done cleaning himself. The only thing left was his tail, his tail was the longest thing on his body, and it was the hardest to get clean. He was about to started when a voice stood out above all the others. He turned to find Sandpaw complaining about how tired she was. He could totally agree.
When Sandpaw sat down beside Beekit he put on his charm and gave her a smile. "It's gotten better now that your here." He didn't really like her more then a friend, but why couldn't he make the girl feel good?

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Sandpaw smiled warmly. "That's sweet of you to say!" she meowed with amusement, "but you better find yourself another flower Beekit." She giggled and started licking her paws, Beekit may have made her day, but she wasn't going to fall of his kit charms. She already has a tom on her mind.  

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Beekit had been rejected a lot of times by She-Cats older then him. He didn't mind it, he found it amusing. He looked up at Sandpaw and gave her a sexual wink with his normal charming grin. "I could never find a flower prettier then you."
Beekit told many lies to She-Cats, he could find a cat better then Sandpaw any day. but he wouldn't tell her that, that would be just rude. He only tells lies to make She-Cats feel better about themselfs. That's not that bad.

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Sandpaw playfully padded his side. Should she play along with this kit's little game? "That's so sweet Beekit!" She mewed, makig herself blush. She decided to play his games. I mean, what harm would that do?

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honeypaw came up and sat by sandpaw and beekit."what cha talk about ?". she had a pretty boring day so far.Just regular apperticeship work andshe was up for a little chat even though she normally keep to herself.

[Frost]

Darkwhisker was walking to the fresh kill pile and saw the 3 "hello Honeypaw, Sandpaw, and Beekit." she called

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мιηησωℓєαρ σƒ ѕυηѕєт¢ℓαη 

αη∂ ιт'ѕ α ѕα∂ ρι¢тυяє, тнє ƒιηαℓ вℓσω нιтѕ уσυ, ѕσмєвσ∂у єℓѕє gєтѕ ωнαт уσυ ωαηтє∂ αgαιη; уσυ кησω ιт'ѕ αℓℓ тнє ѕαмє, αησтнєя тιмє αη∂ ρℓα¢є, яєρєαтιηg нιѕтσяу αη∂ уσυ'яє gєттιηg ѕι¢к σƒ ιт

A slim white she-cat entered the clearing, a trout glistening from her mouth. Her warm, yellow gaze swept over the cats and landed on the four, trotting over to them and placing the fat, juicy trout down before her forepaws. "Hello!" She greeted cheerily, her tail flicking. She slowly crouched down and teared off a small chunk, gulping it down hungrily. Her short-furred white pelt already had a healthy sheen to it; it was clear that she had been enjoying the ripe prey and rich pickings of greenleaf so far. She was in an extremely good mood today, spending her morning hunting when it wasn't so hot out, then eating a nice fattening meal, while heading out in the afternoon to sunbathe near the beach. The beach brought a fresh new wave of thoughts to her mind.

"Anyone want to go out for a swim after?" She asked, smiling brightly.

[Frost]

Darkwhisker looked at Minnowleap and nodded "Sure! That would be nice." she couldn't remember the last time she whet  swimming 

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мιηησωℓєαρ σƒ ѕυηѕєт¢ℓαη  

αη∂ ιт'ѕ α ѕα∂ ρι¢тυяє, тнє ƒιηαℓ вℓσω нιтѕ уσυ, ѕσмєвσ∂у єℓѕє gєтѕ ωнαт уσυ ωαηтє∂ αgαιη; уσυ кησω ιт'ѕ αℓℓ тнє ѕαмє, αησтнєя тιмє αη∂ ρℓα¢є, яєρєαтιηg нιѕтσяу αη∂ уσυ'яє gєттιηg ѕι¢к σƒ ιт 

She smiled cheerfully, eating one more bite and swallowing it, relishing the rich, salty taste. "Great!" She replied, watching the she-cat closely. "Sorry, I don't know your name, what is it? I'm Minnowleap." 

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(I'm a she-cat not a tom)
"Hi, I'm Darkwhisker" she meowed to Minnowleap

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Honeypaw smiled as darkwhisker and minnowleap join her . " hey can I come ? Softheart just taught me how to catch fish !!!" Honey paw said with excitement , she has never been hunting without a mentor looking over her shoulder and quite honestly she was looking forward to it.

[Frost]

Darkwhisker turns and smiles "Sure" she meows

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((OOC: I know I have no room to critique but even if you're low on muse you should try to post at least two sentences or more. ))

Honeypaw purred in satisfaction. "So are we going to go to the beach ?" Honey paw questioned quietly walking towards the camp exit out of the sunset clan camp. He smiled at the thought of the cool refreshing waves lapping At her fur, getting rid of the green leaf heat that she could never escape plus maybe she could catch some fish with a new trick she learned.