Training Begins (Closed)

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Blazepelt woke up with a start. It was morning time. He yawned. Blazepelt still had scars from one of his latest contests. "And I won!" Blazepelt proudly thought. "Hmm... Their is something I feel like I`m forgetting!" The fun loving tom sat up and started cleaning his fur. "Huh. I must of slept in late. I can here a few of the apprentices doing their duty. I think I`ll say hi to them!" Blazepelt mused. He trotted out of the warrior den and into the clearing. He spotted an apprentice. "Oh, that must be Spiderpaw! Wonder what she`s up to," Blazepelt thought. He padded next to Spiderpaw. "Hey Spiderpaw!" Blazepelt mewed, "WHat are you doing?"

(132 WORDS!? That`s the longest in an Rp I`ve ever done!)

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Spiderpaw looked up at the cat that had called her name. She saw her mentor blazepelt standing over her. Spiderpaw said," well, are we going to start training yet... we suppose to start training ages ago". She took a breath and said," can we start with hunting... please,pretty please with mice on top". Spiderpaw made her big and cute hoping it was make him say yes. She waited for him to answer.

ooc: I not trying to brag... but the most I have ever Rp is 600 words

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Blazepelt looked very confused. What was Spiderpaw talking about. And where was her mentor? He wasn`t her mentor, was he? Blazeeplt didn`t remember being her mentor. Hmm... Maybe she`d want to race him to Mossy Oak. "Hey, Spiderpaw, I was wondering, if you aren`t doing anything with your mentor, wherever your mentor might be, would you like to race me to Mossy Oak. It`ll be fun! Trust me!" Blazepelt mewed.

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Spiderapw looked at her mentor very funny.She thought what if he is so displeased he won't even expect I am his apprentice. spiderpaw looked up at blazepaelt and said," ha, ha very funny...but really we should start training eveyone has already left". Spiderpaw started padding towards the exit and looked back to see if her mentor was following.

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Blazepelt looked even more confused. Then something popped into his head. "Oh! I totally forgot!" Blaze pelt exclaimed, remembering yesterday. He quickly trotted next to his apprentice. "So, hunting?" Blaze pelt asked.

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Spiderpaw was happy that her mentor had finally remember there training. She said," hunting sounds great". Spiderpaw was happy he picked hunting because she very good at hunting. She ran out of camp and stop. Spidrepaw said," whoa... this is beautiful". She started hopping around and smelling everything around her.

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Blazepelt half smiled when Spiderpaw gasped. He didn't blame her. After all, Blazepelt was really excited when he first went out of the camp. Blazepelt trotted in front of her and started for an open glade where they could practice.

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Waspaw followed almost jumping in to him and jump on to the grassy area. Waspaw looked up at blazepelt and said," I already know the hunters crouch... let me show you". Waspaw got careful in to the hunters crouch and lifted his nose and waited for a sign of prey. He heard a sound of a rabbit and saw that rabbit eating grass. Wsapaw stalked towards it and jump right on top of the rabbit giving it the killing bit. Waspaw looked up at blazepelt and dropped the rabbit at his paw. He waited for his reaction.

ooc: I am going to make him a warrior on the 14 of april. You have 30 days left.

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OOC: It's Spiderpaw. Also, Spiderpaw may know the hunter's crouch, but it's unrealistic for Spiderpaw to actually kill the rabbit, plus, Spiderpaw probably couldn't do a crouch that had know errors. Also, haven't you heard the saying, mice can feel you, rabbits can hear you. A hunters crouch probably wouldn't work on a rabbit. And that rabbit would've ran so Spiderpaw would've had to run a little before killing the rabbit.

Blazepelt looked unimpressed. Looking at the rabbit, he could tell it was a really old one. It was at the end of it's life anyways. He didn't like that one bit. Blazepelt dispised killing prey that didn't have a chance to escape. He was furious! The orange cat didn't say anything though. He decided to go somewhere else. "Come on!" Blazepelt mewed with a surprising, rough tone.

OOC: I'm pretty sure yoi still need to tell the leader and wait for the next ceremony to come

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occ: so sorry about that

Spiderpaw dropped her head in saddness. She picked up the rabbit and tossed it far away from her. She padded towards blazepelt slowly. She thought why am I so stupid and dumb, I never going to become a warrior. She stopped in front of blazepelt and said," what are we going to do next". She said this slowly and saddly without her usual spunk.

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OOC: It's okay as long as you try not to do it again What I meant about not being able to kill the rabbit is, It would be unusual if Spiderpaw could deliver a killing bite. Maybe a bite that could do severe injuries but not a killing bite- yet.

Blazepelt kept walking. The he abruptly stopped. Hmm... What should I do? Blazepelt decided maybe, he should explain SA few things before he actually showed it to her. "Uh. I think we can start with hunting mice. They are fairly abundant currently so, uhhhh. You have to be reeeeally silent because the mice can feel you. When you crouch, try to even your balance, like this." Blazepelt mewed. He went into a hunters crouch, made sure his weight was evenly distributed to both sides, and leaped up. It wasn't as powerful as he could go but Blazepelt wasn't looking for power just yet. Only posture. "See?" Blazepelt mewed.

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Spiderpaw looked up and saw blazepelt.A little happier now and said," ok". She got in to the hunter crouch and made sure to keep her weigh evenly balanced. Then she jump with all her might and trying to keep her posture. She landed almost falling over but stayed on her paws. She looked up at her mentor for corrections.

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Blazepelt smiled. He laughed a little and mewed, "That's what happened to me when I first tried! I suggest fociusing on your balance when you're up in the air. If you don't land softly, the prey will run away,: Blazepelt explained. "Now, try again. Remember to make sure your weight doesn't shift while you're in air. You will need to act quickly though."

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Spiderpaw got back in to a hunter crouch and made sure her weigh was evenly balanced and she just forward trying to keep her posture, but this time she mainly focused on her balance. She try to land softly. This time she didn't fall over. She looked up for corrections.

ooc: sorry @snowykcnomre about the wait

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Blazepelt nodded. He thought that her landing was a little rough, but it was better than before. "So, what do you want to do now?" Blazepelt asked. Hopefully she doesn`t want to do some fighting. I am horrible at that! Blazepelt shuddered when he thought about his fighting skills. They were very shaky.