Post by Splash on Dec 3, 2012 17:53:51 GMT -5
I have a rogue, Thorn, who many would say is evil incarnate. A heartless killer. However, since he's possibly my favorite charrie, I plan to give him a lot more depth then that.
It starts with nightmares. Terrible nightmares. but they are nothing compared to the fact that Thorn starts feeling an emotion he hasn't before - guilt. And empathy. After killing a cat, he suddenly feels sorry. And then the weight of all those deaths on his shoulders comes crashing down. but not only that. Memories of his own pain course through him and though he's physically fine, the mental structures he put up moons ago to keep all the pain he'd endured out break.
Thorn runs away from the land of the rogues, before collapsing in _____Clan's territory. Finding him unconscious, having ran until he passed out, they bring him to their camp. They don't know who he is. After he wakes up, he requests to join the clan - a thing he used to despise.
Though in the day, he's almost robotic. Not a bad warrior, bringing in a fine amount of prey, at night he goes out alone into the territory and tries to piece together the broken shards of his life. Find out who he is. Where he belongs.
It's during this time that, while he's alone, a she-cat from _____Clan finds him. She has to be kind of cruel and dark herself, very ambitious and determined to get to the bottom of this mystery cat.
In his weakened state, Thorn tells her everything, pouring out the story of his life. She hardly seems to care about the deaths. She's glad to be the one that knows about him, who he is. And she's probably the only reason he gets back on his feet. Without knowing it, he finds love.
Then, the main antagonist from Thorns past, the monster from his nightmares shows up in the flesh, bending over the body of the she-cat he started to love, blood glistening on his teeth. Horrified, Thorn nearly breaks once again. And, with some coaxing, this cats gets him to follow him back to his little camp with a few random rogues that make a little team.
They have a plot to assassinate the leader of _____Clan. Thorn was a good way in and an amazing fighter - perfect. They send Thorn back on a suicide mission to assassinate the leader.
Thorn struggles, thoughts and emotions reeling and, in the end, he doesn't kill the leader. but he realizes he can't stay. Not withe rogues watching him so closely. He leaves without a word, disappearing off the face of the Earth.
He soon learns that the rogue group is going it to kill the leader anyway. He goes back and tells the clan, but, they don't believe him and send him off.
Thorn finally musters up the courage to face his past - all of it. He gathers up a small amount of old friends and teammates. (Nitro will be one. There will be about three - if you want one ask and I'll PM you the important parts of their history as I want this to remain mysterious).
This small team meets the other team of rogues on the border of _____Clan. A battle erupts and, though the ratio is almost 2:1 in favor of the other team, they win. His friends leave and go back to their lives and Thorn realizes he doesn't have that anymore.
Until I make another plot with him, he will be traveling aimlessly.
so, we need....
a) ______Clan (CANNOT be Storm or Frost)
b) she-cat from _____Clan
c) antagonist ('round 40 moons)
d) antagonists' group (four members)
e) thorns' group (needs one member) (Nitro, Cario)
FOR C AND E, I WILL PM YOU NECESSARY PARTS OF THEIR HISTORY. REMEMBER, THIS PLOT HAS MANY SECRETS, SO YOU WILL NOT KNOW MOST OF IT.
